Hi my name is I come from China. I won the 110m Liu XiangHurdles at the olympic in 2004.I entered the olympic again in 2008, but sadly I knocked down some Hurdles and disappointed my country. So my country wants me to win in the 2012 Olympics and I will try not to let them down.
Entering the London olympic stadium the crowd went wild!!! I did not want to let my country down so I am going to give it my all. “On your marks get set go” I was off.
Sprinting to the first Hurdles I jumped, but sadly I knocked the first hurdle down. I fell on the grown and hurt the some leg I hurt in 2008. I had let my country and myself down I was sad. I got back up and hopped to the place I came in from.
But then someone stopped me and tell me I was not allowed that way. So I turned around and hop to the last hurdles and kissed it because I would miss it because I was going to retire. Then I Hopped away with some friends helping me.
Entering the London olympic stadium the crowd went wild!!! I did not want to let my country down so I am going to give it my all. “On your marks get set go” I was off.
Sprinting to the first Hurdles I jumped, but sadly I knocked the first hurdle down. I fell on the grown and hurt the some leg I hurt in 2008. I had let my country and myself down I was sad. I got back up and hopped to the place I came in from.
But then someone stopped me and tell me I was not allowed that way. So I turned around and hop to the last hurdles and kissed it because I would miss it because I was going to retire. Then I Hopped away with some friends helping me.
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Hey Jordan,
ReplyDeleteThis piece of writing needs some more work in it. Maybe you could fix it up in your own time. Anyway, I can't wait to read more interesting post. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
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